Saturday, June 9, 2012

Chapter One


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Chapter 1:

Hussain: Hey Lulu

Lulu: Hi

Hussain: How was class?

Lulu: Fine, so do you remember my friend Sara

Hussain: Yeah...

Hussain: So can I join you?

Lulu: Oh sorry we were just about to leave Sara just remembered that 
she had some homework to do. I’ll see you later, bye.

Lulu grabbed Sara and ran away leaving Hussain just standing there. Sara 
really hates Hussain and she always got a feeling that he hates her too. 
She is usually a kind nice person but this guy irritates the hell out of her.
She still remembers that night when Lulu dragged her to go bowling with a couple of Saudi guys she met. Sara got a bad feeling from the first moment she met them but she stayed because she wouldn’t leave Lulu alone with three creepy guys. During that night it was obvious that Hussain really liked Lulu but as always Lulu was clueless. After that night Hussain kept texting Lulu every day and then she realized how much of a creep he is.
So, after that weird encounter they decided to go to Sara’s place. They got on the bus and for Sara’s surprise HE was on the bus, Ali. He was sitting there with his best friend Sultan.

Lulu: Ooh hey Sultan, how are you?

Sultan: Hey Lulu, I’m great, How are you?

Lulu: Great, didn’t know you were taking summer classes. Ooh right I forgot to introduce you this is Sara my friend.

 Sultan: Hey Sara nice to meet you

Sara: Nice to meet you too

Sultan: And this is my friend Ali, Ali these are Lulu and Sara.

Ali: Nice to meet you too,, Sara I think that you are with me in calculus right?

Sara: Yeah I think so.. (Sara couldn’t believe herself; she actually got introduced to him. She felt so grateful that Lulu was there to introduce them. She was so happy she could just burst into song. She actually has a chance with him. Maybe being friends is just enough for her.)

Ali: Then maybe we can do homework together or study together sometime?

Sara: Yeah sure. (At that moment Sara was just over the top)

Sultan: So where are you going?

Lulu: Sara’s house, where are you guys going?

Sultan: We are going to Ali’s house he just moved in.

Sara: Ooh congrats on the new place (She had the biggest smile on her face)

Ali: Thank you

Sara: So this is our stop

Ali: Really it’s ours too.

Sara: Ooh I guess we are neighbors now.

Sultan: So we will see you later. We should all hang out sometime.

Lulu: Yeah just call me anytime and we’ll plan something.

In Sara’s house:

Lulu: That guy Ali is cute.

Sara: Yeah he is..

Lulu: So?

Sara: So what?

Lulu: So you’re together in class.

Sara: Yeah

Lulu: Come on Sara a’9b6lch eya

Sara: Lol entee kela “bt’9b6enee”,, and you know I’m not that type of girl.

Lulu: Ma feeha shee you will start as friends and then you don’t know what’s gonna happen.

Sara: I don’t know...

Lulu: Just think about it.

To be continued…

1 comment:

  1. Post the next chapter .. I want to see what happens :)

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