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Chapter 1:
Hussain: Hey Lulu
Lulu: Hi
Hussain: How was class?
Lulu: Fine, so do you remember my friend Sara
Hussain: Yeah...
Hussain: So can I join you?
Lulu: Oh sorry we were just about to leave Sara just
remembered that
she had some homework to do. I’ll see you later, bye.
Lulu grabbed Sara and ran away leaving Hussain just standing
there. Sara
really hates Hussain and she always got a feeling that he hates her
too.
She is usually a kind nice person but this guy irritates the hell out of her.
She still remembers that night when Lulu dragged her to go
bowling with a couple of Saudi guys she met. Sara got a bad feeling from the
first moment she met them but she stayed because she wouldn’t leave Lulu alone
with three creepy guys. During that night it was obvious that Hussain really
liked Lulu but as always Lulu was clueless. After that night Hussain kept
texting Lulu every day and then she realized how much of a creep he is.
So, after that weird encounter they decided to go to Sara’s
place. They got on the bus and for Sara’s surprise HE was on the bus, Ali. He
was sitting there with his best friend Sultan.
Lulu: Ooh hey Sultan, how are you?
Sultan: Hey Lulu, I’m great, How are you?
Lulu: Great, didn’t know you were taking summer classes. Ooh
right I forgot to introduce you this is Sara my friend.
Sultan: Hey Sara nice to meet you
Sara: Nice to meet you too
Sultan: And this is my friend Ali, Ali these are Lulu and
Sara.
Ali: Nice to meet you too,, Sara I think that you are with me
in calculus right?
Sara: Yeah I think so.. (Sara couldn’t believe herself; she actually
got introduced to him. She felt so grateful that Lulu was there to introduce
them. She was so happy she could just burst into song. She actually has a
chance with him. Maybe being friends is just enough for her.)
Ali: Then maybe we can do homework together or study together
sometime?
Sara: Yeah sure. (At that moment Sara was just over the top)
Sultan: So where are you going?
Lulu: Sara’s house, where are you guys going?
Sultan: We are going to Ali’s house he just moved in.
Sara: Ooh congrats on the new place (She had the biggest smile
on her face)
Ali: Thank you
Sara: So this is our stop
Ali: Really it’s ours too.
Sara: Ooh I guess we are neighbors now.
Sultan: So we will see you later. We should all hang out
sometime.
Lulu: Yeah just call me anytime and we’ll plan something.
In Sara’s house:
Lulu: That guy Ali is cute.
Sara: Yeah he is..
Lulu: So?
Sara: So what?
Lulu: So you’re together in class.
Sara: Yeah
Lulu: Come on Sara a’9b6lch eya
Sara: Lol entee kela “bt’9b6enee”,, and you know I’m not that
type of girl.
Lulu: Ma feeha shee you will start as friends and then you don’t
know what’s gonna happen.
Sara: I don’t know...
Lulu: Just think about it.
To be continued…
Post the next chapter .. I want to see what happens :)
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